The MARTA slander tag made me play this game instantly; I just pick up anything set in ATL. I like how the chat sections and regular VN sections are paced. Naomi's room being so dark contrasted a lot with the real world. It was disorienting in a good way, like how Naomi felt. The chats with Julia had me on edge. The way she used proper grammar was unnerving, and the contrast with how young Naomi typed made me even more dreadful about when the other shoe would inevitably drop. The mirroring of how in the beginning Naomi tells Cynthia her room is upstairs, first door on the right, and then Julia tells Naomi the exact same thing. Amazing game, congrats on winning first place and 1,000 downloads, you deserve it.
oh my god an atlanta native read this, im so glad!! it makes me happy that you noticed the difference in typing style, i spent a lot of time tweaking that. that being said the mirroring of naomi and julias rooms was completely unintentional haha, i guess i default to that when writing. that being said maybe ill say its intentional from now on, it's a very neat detail :3