Heya, firstly I want to say thank you for taking the time to read. it means the world really. An additional thanks for your feedback. You really went above and beyond with it. I'd address everything, but right now I am not in the headspace to do so with the respect it deserves. So, for now I'll latch onto the talk of CG's and additional sprites.
Yeah. That was the original plan. In fact the reason why it remains looking at the tent for so long is that I fully intended to go back in once we had the Cg's made. However, between attending a convention, Umber's study, and job, our original plan didn't pan out. It fully is in my mind the weakest point of the presentation outside of the issues with parts of my writing.
I'm not sure if we will return to this project to add in the CG's. Though when I have some more time off work I would like to fix some errors with the text, and tidy up the latter half. But you are 100% correct.
Again, I really do appreciate the feedback.