I love the story and art style - it feels a bit fast-paced but otherwise I'm very intrigued on what happens next!
There are a couple of bugs: When you meet one of the characters, a woman with white hair I believe, who gives you important information, the screen fades to black for a few dialogue boxes. Also at the end of the game, it fades to black and doesn't take you anywhere such as a menu.
But as a demo I think this is really good! Keep at it ^-^