Just a lovely read! A short but sweet story about some cute little bakers. The star of the show is definitely the character designs and art, all of the sprites look great, and so much personality comes through in all the designs, and the baking sequences are just lovely, especially the one at the end with the finished lemon pie. The writing has the occasional odd word choice or miss spelling, but I attribute that to what I assume to be translation to english, and there were no errors that took me out of the story.
Overall a great read with a little bit of angst but ending with a feel good resolution!