Hey, just finished chapter 2. Good start so far! It's definitly up there with my favourites, alongside Seeds of Destiny and Re;Roundbound (if you know those two)
Points for innovation for starting the story in a more middle eastern inspired region, instead of the lush green central european grass/woodlands far too many fantasy stories use to start their adventures. Old Temple is a solid "starting town".
Sofia is an adorable protagonist, a bit naive perhaps, but it's interesting for the hero not be a fighter at all, and I respect that you even implemented that into her combat to keep it consistend.
Rashi and Ofsy are pretty good as well, though I personally like Ofsy just a smidge more.
I also like that you kept the whole aspect of Sofias breast condition fairly grounded, like how she worries about getting too big, the flustered tension when she has to milk herself with help, how they make her bump into things accidentally, etc. Often kink media pays the side effects of such a growth no mind, like I've played games where the player character can grow to absolutely ridiculous sizes without consequence.
I have only one criticism so far, and that is that the maps are a little barren sometimes. I get that Old Temple is supposed to be abandoned, but some of the houses are huge empty rooms, and often ways just end abruptly at the screens edge. I tested every possible street around the central plaza, thinking that maybe there could be other areas to visit, but no. Maybe you could seal those streets off with rubble and debries, if you don't plan on doing anything with them?
Anyway, those are my thoughts on the current version