Hi there! First of all, congratulations on the project. I really liked the foundation you have, and the potential behind it is clear. Since I know you are in the alpha stage, I wanted to respectfully share a few details that I think could help polish the experience and make it even better:
> The diary: I thought it was an excellent feature at the beginning, but then it disappeared. It would be awesome if it could remain as a fixed icon or an on-screen option so players can check the notes whenever they want.
> The Japanese translations: It's a great detail to include the translation side-by-side, but sometimes I got so caught up reading the translated text that I lost track of what was happening visually in the scene. Maybe a subtitle system or a different format would help it feel more fluid.
> Interactivity: At times, it felt more like a linear read than an interactive game. Also, it became a bit tedious to constantly check what changed day after day or during character conversations. Adding clearer or more accessible choices would make the gameplay feel much smoother.
This is just my humble opinion, and I'm sharing it with the sole intention of helping out. I truly enjoyed what you've done so far and look forward to seeing how it grows. Keep up the great work!