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It was fun. I’m looking forward to what comes next, although I think it was a bit broken (at least for me).

>Also
There are some minor issues with the Spanish translation (not really problems, just something "odd"), namely that several "Incel/"imageboard" words are translated literally, not quite accurately. Sometimes it's easier to understand them in English.

I say this because some words in Spanish-speaking Chan slang are used differently, while others are used the same way as in English.

For example, “Humanoides femeninas”.... nobody says that, it sounds really awkward. Yeah, it’s the literal translation of “Foid/Femoid”, but in Spanish people just use “Foid/Femoid”, same as in English.

Same thing with “Androfémino” (the first time I’ve ever heard that word, it sounds way too larper).

Another case is “NewFag”. In Hispanic incel/chan forums people use “NuevoPuto” (the literal translation), not “Nuevo Maricón” (which feels like a lighter, more sanitized version).

They’re dumb little details, it’s not really important or anything, but I figured I’d mention it because it caught my attention.

Thank you for feedback. I didn’t do the translation, but I can fix those in the next update. When you say “broken”, do you mean something else besides the translation? If yes, please share

They were pretty minor issues. The first one was that, for some reason, the game automatically loaded the “female” script even though I had just started playing. The game assumed my character was female, since it removed options like “Confess to the sin of being a girl” or “Embrace masculinity” during the "King event", and instead automatically skipped to a screen where you selected your “sins” (I don’t remember exactly). But the issue was fixed after I deleted the game and started over. Now it’s working normally.

The second issue is probably more related to my PC, but I’ll mention it anyway. After finishing the tutorial (where the “Retry” or “Main Menu” screen appears), if I pressed “Retry,” the game would show the program’s error screen (I’m not sure if that was intentional or not). Then, if I pressed “Retry” again on the error screen, it would load the scene where the protagonist leaves the house and faints, or something like that.

Other than that, you’re doing a great job. A lot of the details really impressed me, both visually and mechanically. It’s very original.

Thanks! Okay I’m gonna look into it