I like it but why does every girl in the story say 'Kay, its pretty dumb imho.
Like in kingdome come Deliverence, i do not like answers that does not match what i say like for example
Lilith: Did it work?
Answers: A Little or Not at all
Choosing A little results in frank saying "Of course it did"
It's a cute story, i dont really care about the sex, just the tension and buildup is fine but some things are really ridicoulous, it seems like some guys fantasy instead of something to reach out to the public as a game, being a bitch is not a turn on so you really loose my patronage on that.