I LOVE this game! Despite it only being a demo, it's peak. The dialogue feels natural and it flows well, and as for the story it is very catchy. The only shame is that this game is so cool that you can't wait for the next chapter to come out. I've also been quite curious about the character's information. It would be very nice to have character profiles, but then again we'll probably get to know them in the following chapters.
Nevertheless, i feel like this game is very well made! Whilst reading the comments from the moderators i really got the impresson that they're working hard on the game. In short y'all are a fantastic team! I can't wait to see what'll come out of this game :P