Haven't finished the game yet but first of all I have to say I love that you use the music of the movie House as well as some of its aesthetic choices.
Second of all there are some issues with optimalization I think as sometimes I have to wait quite a while for new dialogue windows to appear despite nothing happening on the screen. Also walking animations feel a bit choppy and the mouse cursor tends to experience framedrops (weird as the game runs normally aside from that).
I'd also prefer if you had toned down the "Brandi is not a full woman" stuff from the other girls because it feels a bit too mean spirited from them (however it makes perfect sense from Brandi herself)
Oh and I think you should shorten the basement stairway sequence or maybe add some more effects as you descend (similar to SH2's historical society stairway) as it started to get more stale than creepy after a while.
I also don't vibe with Cindy's design, she feels like she's from a completely different game and that's kinda jarring. Nothing big, just saying she looks a bit weird
Also there's a typo during the dialogue with Addie in her sex scene but I don't really remember what it was, I will play that part again and reply with screenshot.
Sorry for the mainly critical comment but I really like the game so far and have a lot of fun playing it, just got to the third chapter