I think this is a great example of a text adventure being bolstered greatly by the advent of AI generation. The pics help quite a bit to sell the weight gain portions. Your writing is clear and for the most part bereft of any glaring typos. The domination of Lucy and Mia were very hot and I'm very pleased to see that you added progression pics on stuffings. And even more pleased to see that you actually put in sex scenes! Something a large portion of this community seems to be very allergic to is some good ol'-fashioned penis in vagina action which vexes me to no end. So it was nice to see you getting to fuck the girls after blimping them up.
Now for a few criticisms:
- This is more of a personal pet peeve than anything else, but having time limits for the entire breadth of the game is more stressful than anything else since I have the compulsion to always want to experience everything a game has to offer and being forced to start from the beginning feels a bit like a slap in the face. Thankfully, I was able to get all of the girls to max weight and affection/domination but I'm just not a fan of swords of Damocles dangling over my head when I'm trying to beat my mystery meat.
- I think the Uru mystery drink mechanic is pretty undercooked. At least personally, I'd prefer to not pay for the privilege of playing Russian Roulette with my hard earned dough. I think making it random is okay within a set positive range, but having any drawbacks once again feels a bit anti-user. Why not just either have no effect or a reduced effect? Isn't the drawback of losing your money enough? Especially in a game that has a set amount of cash you can even earn?
- Have you heard of afterdetailers in AI models? I think it would help with some of your generations since the eyes looked a bit wonky in a good amount of them. Also, if you haven't, in the negative prompt, make sure to include signatures since I saw some scrawl in the corners of some pictures.
Overall though, pretty good! Had a fun time playing it, just wish we could feed them even bigger, but I'm a degenerate so what do I know? Looking forward to the Spirit Within!
P.S. Without ever playing the game before or looking at any of the supplementary materials I had coincidentally named my demon Mia, which led to quite a bit of confusion on my end, haha.