I loved the characters, their models and their personalities. I really liked the way emotions are worked on in the novel, how the dialogues are well constructed. The negative point of all this is the excess of drama; Okay, the drama was necessary to happen as it did and the protagonist has the right to react in a more introspective way, but it bothered me that the central drama (the relationship between adoptive brothers) was so sidelined, given so many surreal events.
The only thing that was a negative point, for me, was the need to make this a true incest. This was simply irritating and so surreal that I couldn't take it seriously. But other than that, it's, without a doubt, one of the best novels I've ever played. Even the lewd scenes were the most well-crafted and deepest of those I've ever seen (and despite the genre being focused on that, I don't even like scenes like that that much)!
I would love for there to be a sequel or even an alternative universe, just to have more of Jaye and the other characters!