Fair enough. I deleted the original post and will re-write it accordingly.
Yours was actually the first I reviewed and hence one of the longer entries, and I did in fact read through everything. I probably should not have made the scores visible to you because I write in a rather blunt and critical way. That's actually why I shortened them as I went along. These are all ~2000 words scenarios and do not take more than a few minutes to read.
Overall, I like the premise and the theme, but not the execution. It's well written, but I am not your target audience.