Great update!
That said Naomi's parents are massively to blame and have a lot to answer for, they really messed her up. I feel massively sorry for her and I now find myself quite against the MC. Which If this is going to turn out to be "poor mom needed to be dominated to cope with the stress of her cut-throat job" I'll have no sympathy. Lose the job. These things could be problematic for to full enjoyment of the game. What a great story though! Great Quality!