Hi! I'm glad you enjoyed the story~
In terms of typos/errors (especially singular verbs for the plural they), I've noticed quite a few over the last couple of months of feedback, and at some point when I'm done with a few current projects I'll go back and correct them. The waits are annoying, I agree, and while I don't think I'll be removing them entirely I am looking for a way to make them skippable.
Thank you for playing!!