Since this is here, "If your preferred set of neo-pronouns are not on the list, you can ask for them, as it's incredibly simple to code that in comparison of things like hair.", could it/its be added?
And about the rewrite so I'm just just asking for something, the prose is really nice, a lot more than I recall it being though it's been since the last update since I've read. Not saying was bad before, but it's standing out a lot now in a way I don't remember it doing. Also, love Mattie even more than I did already after the conversation with her