The English is really bad (grammar, phrasing, and spelling), the person listed as speaker is wrong about a third of the time, and the story is, of course, patently absurd, but despite all of that, this is still one of the hottest VNs I've ever seen! I can't remember the last one that got me so "worked up". I can't wait to see the continuation of this. Really impressed. Most of my concerns are merely proofreading issues anyway, that can be easily fixed.