The GUI is clean and easy, the art is gorgeous (I don't care whether it's AI or not)... I'm just going to come out and say that the story execution is terrible. You have such blatant inconsistencies within conversations, matching conversations to events, and just everywhere else possible. Does MC have a job, or are they in school, or neither? Do they live in an apartment sharing a wall with one girl, in a separate house with their landlady? Are they an adult or a high-school kid? How many times in one day can I drink coffee and garden? Which events push the clock forward, and does it make any sense? A chat in the kitchen takes all morning but I can visit four other women and do hours of chore without noon arriving. When someone says come back after noon, why do I never do that? When the bartender says come back on Thursday, why does it schedule me for tomorrow? What happened in the bathroom with the landlady, because I'd probably have liked to see that more than drinking more coffee. It honestly feels like someone took three single-girl games and glued them together so it would be a harem...
Thanks for the comment. You are completely right about the location for the Carmen scene,leaving the beautiful cove for a other spot makes no sense.
Also, it might be a small thing, but thanks to your comment, I've updated the game so time now passes correctly after each and every event.
Your points about the story inconsistencies are totally valid. Because of this, I have decided to focus much more heavily on the script. I already started shifting my focus to the writing with the 0.82.00 update.
I would love to hear your thoughts on it once you play. I believe I can satisfy your expectations, even if I can't fix every single inconsistency in one patch, the story execution will get better with each new release