I’ve actually uploaded the first chapter of the rewrite today so you can play it now!
The rewrite looks very promising! I love that the occupations actually do a lot and we get to have more of a consistent personality now. It feels more authentic in a way, the characters too. You did an amazing job!
Thank you, it took a lot of work and a lot of learning to get this to where I wanted it to be, so I’m glad you liked it!
