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The game is really good I havent finished all characters and routes but I'll leave my opinion anyways. While I consider myself more of a bull, I think wether its netori or netorare its not a deal breaker either way since whats hot are the scenarios, but its still a massive plus for being one of the only to try netori.

I love the abundance of characters and paths, as well as of pictures! the style is simplistic enough that its cooler to me than others (tho, as always, wish it wasnt AI, but I half forgive them for offering most of the game for free).

As for the text, here comes my only issue so far, at first I thought it was cool that the mc was all cool and stuff, but soon enough started seeing tiresome patterns. First of all: why does everyone use emojis? thats so cringe, specially if the main guy is supposed to be some chad bull. Adults dont spam emojis for every expression every sentence, and god, demon emoji isnt hot in nearly any circumstance !!!. Second, I can understand the mc talking like cool dude all the time (tho it gets tiresome) but why do the girls also start talking like that after a bit into ANY route? it kinda takes away from their personality and samefies everyone. The shy girl starts talking like badass gal, the milf as well etc.

If its written by AI as well this could be explained since it tends to end up onto same patterns ALWAYS unless closely directed, and in such a case I implore you to review it more closely, cause on experience it does start to become a little cringe in something that shouldnt be difficult at all, the stories direction is good (thats usually harder) its just the way everyone talks. They just gotta type more like normal adults, what is this demon emoji bs every two messages. Even the milf uses emojis like whaaat.

A shy girl saying "she's got some fire tho" isnt really a manner of speech that makes me think "shy girl" at all. And its clear opposite to the very beggining when they usually do feel different.

I feel the shy girl should still be somewhat shy even as she opens up to the bull. It is part of their appeal to be different and more true to their character. The corruption of them should happen in the way they become addicted and express their addiction to mc *through their own personality.* And not just become a generic slut regardless of character.

Despite my critique, this is a 4.5 out of 5 stars. The last half star being a little bit my critique and a few bugs that seem game breaking, I have encountered some girls just simply banish or never appear to begin with in the chat list once you choose their story, making it the only option to chat and progress to hit the notif when it pops up, making you close the game and reopen if you misses it, seems like a big deal. Also the names in the notifications usually have like weird numbers.

It does a lot good, and what it doesnt I think its easily fixable, tho if the text thing is fixed its kind of a shame that whats already out kinda wont change probably as most devs dont like to redo whats already been done.