The style in this submission is beyond reproach. From the title logo to the character art all the way to the background texturing, the color contrasts do a ton of work.
The writing sparks in me a desire to read more, and I wish this had 12 pages to flesh out the power dynamics, how the PCs can tilt them, and knock-on effects of the ichor exposure from a mechanics standpoint (GIMME THE REVELATIONS). A couple of possible misspellings and the understanding this made it 4 seconds under the deadline does not in any way diminish the rich narrative soil presented in this trifold.