Hiii thanks for you comments and thanks for you submission. I am not sure if the 4 hour long video was supposed to be where your track is supposed to be listened to? I seemed to have found an exported track out of you DAW at about 3:55:00 time mark and listened to that.
If I am reading your description correct you were a bit rushed and didn't get as finished as you would have liked? If that is the case is shows a bit. I think that extra polish of playing with instrument velocities and pulling notes off the grid here and there could have helped a lot give the song that human feel. The mix and balance was great though and I think you have a cohesive track from start to finish. I appreciate the different colors of sounds you put in there, I think they all work really well.
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Thanks for letting me know! The Video was the entire Live Stream of me making the video, while the Time Stamp given is when everything is basically put together. I can be rushed sometimes, only having about 45 minutes to work on a song, but I usually need 2-5 hours to work on an actually good soundtrack like this one. It also doesn't help that I can't really come back to a project TBH, so I usually have to do the entire song in one sitting. Anyways, thanks for letting me know!