Hi! Thanks for the comments on my track and thanks for your submission. I am going to try and be as fair as possible here, but many of my comments are just gonna be things I really vibe with considering you picked a sound palette I totally get down with. I think your mix is solid and you have two compositions that feel connected in ideas, but still have different modes, functions, and emotions. I don't know if you tried this while composing "Forging the Astral Lance" but I think it might have been great to hear the attack of the voices we get at the start of the track hitting some key downbeats later on in the track, just a thought! Thanks for making these tracks and I really enjoyed the listen!