I was very interested in the setting and our story, but tbh once I got into I did not like it. Mainly cause everyone is too damn nice! My whole family and I rebelled against the king. We killed, I assume, many of them. Like ok maybe the King is a nice guy, whatever, but every damn knight and servant and whoever I meet?? Like, come on, bruh, give me someone who doesn't like me.
Hi, I understand your criticism. The reason why the story was written that way, aside from in-game motifs, is that I wanted to write something purposefully on the comforting, softer side. This game is very personal, and so I understand that the choices I made will not be liked by every reader. Thank you anyway for trying it out!