This is a really interesting concept. I really enjoyed playing, even though I completely suck at it and couldn't figure it out. I was able to turn on all systems and got the shades. But it didn't fly at all, I die. Couple of things I'd say it needs -- some sort of hint system and a quicker restart -- I wanted to get back and try again immediately but having to rewatch the cutscene and wait for that report to end was getting in the way.
The art is amazing, I loved it and the audio was spot on. Overall, great idea and I hope you turn this into a full game at one point in the same style and everything. Different vehicles and different scenarios -- feels a lot like "I Expect You To Die" non-VR version.
Good work!