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The art is great!  Where did you find the time to make all those assets??  I really liked the CRT effect and palette you used.

I think you've got a good thing going here and you've got one of the best entries in the jam so I wanted to give some extra feedback.  This is info intended to help, not criticize.  I actually had a hard time playing your game in the current state.  I guess I am a lazy gamer and tend not to read all the instructions.   Even with your game, which looks very intriguing and fun to play, this was true.   So, each time a scene started, I was kind of lost at what to do.  For example, the visual feedback was not clear during the sorting scene, I saw a thumb up and down, but I didn't know if I should click it or not click it - if it stays on the conveyor belt, is that good? do I want to remove the good or bad ones from the conveyor belt?  It was similar during the next scene.  I didn't know where to look to get the info to do what I needed to do. 

So, with that said, you don't need to adjust your game for players like me, but if you want us to play and keep playing, I recommend digging into intuitive game flow.  Less instruction, more guidance.  I hope that makes sense.

Good luck with this project and looking forward to seeing future projects too!

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Thank you very much for the feedback. This is actually true, but I confess it took me a while to start making the game because I spent a few more days thinking about the idea. When I finally came up with it, I focused on the art and ended up leaving the tutorials for the last few minutes 😅 I'll start focusing on those points; your feedback was very helpful.