Well, here's my honest opinion. No sugarcoating.
The artstyle, music, backgrounds and cutscenes are REALLY amazing and high quality. It's all really eye-catching and sweet to look at, although..
The damn clueless and genuinely brainless MC ruins a lot of the game, aswell with the pretty confusing and basic narration (im guessing the writer's first language isn't just English, and I guess it's fine).
Also, scenes like the Café scene, or PB and Kevin fighting all the time are overall really weird and unnecessary.
Also. Why are we censoring swears? This is not a kid's game.
I like the idea of spending time at day and at night with a "different dude", it's really fun, and this genuinely has a GIANT potential but.. As much as I'd like to speak positively about it. This wasn't really it :<
Hopefully EP 1 rewritten will fix all those issues, good luck and love you<3 Can't wait for the update :3