Aight, since I paid my dollars and finished a full blind playthrough to the end of one route (Seeker, Fair King, Romance End; I hadn't heard of this game until about a week before its release) I'll give my honest opinion.
Pacing wise, this was top notch - I was pretty much stuck on this vn whenever I got a bit of free time. The characters were very charming, and the art felt like it suited the atmosphere of the game quite well. I really had to think with some of the choices too, which I always appreciate. : ]
I will say this - and any future works - would benefit from an editor. You have a few favorite phrases you tend to use and re-use a lot (Something cold sure was twisting in MC's stomach...), there were a couple of scene changes in the route I was in that felt a little awkward and I caught a few minor typos here and there. Nothing jarring, but enough to take me out of it for a bit.
That said, for a completely solo dev taking on a project of this length and magnitude, this was some seriously impressive work. Good show!