Hi there! Just finishing reading this rule and got to say it's quite good;) Like all the allusions and the flavor, yet I feel like it might be better to have some kind of tables or generators to inspire the player?
Also, I'm willing to offer free translation and reposting at Chinese platforms. The previous projects and my e-mail address can be find at my profile page, pls let me know if you are interested. Anyway, thank you for sharing this amazing work!