This feels like a brief snapshot of real lives. Feels like girls I know, or have met briefly. I admire your skill at writing dialogue. Addiction is messy, drugs are messy, grief is messy, I haven't seen this worst-case scenario play out IRL but I can see how it could.
Thanks for creating this <3
(also, noticed an error: midway thru it says "image 'bg carz' not found." instead of whatever image is supposed to be there)