I love this track. You really went for a memorable melody and it works. The track is also a complete whole, with multiple parts, proper buildup and a lot of emotional weight. This is one of the best tracks I've heard so far in the jam!
I'm not sure if I hear a strong correlation to the theme, but you nailed the "melody" aspect of this jam.
Melody Clarity 4/5
It's a clear melody that maybe doesn't breathe quite enough. Sometimes it's good to take a breather and put a rest in your phrases!
Impact 5/5
The melody here is strong, emotional and really goes somewhere which I think is really important. A full story is told through music here.
Composition 5/5
The track is pretty much complete, good flow from intro to the main track, and beautiful high point at the 1:12 mark. I hear nothing wrong with the harmony etc. either
Listenability 5/5
Really loved listening to this!
Correlation to Theme 3/5
Huge props for going for a strong melody, but I have to admit I'm not sure what the overall theme hear is in relation to a weapon.
One of the clear favorites for me. Great job!