I just finished this novel, and I haven´t read your other work yet.
And I liked it. I think this novel is quite good. The history is well written and captivating. The characters have defined personalities and they don´t feel bland. The soundtrack is fine, and I see that you have been improving your artwork in time.
The reader will find some typos here and there, and some phrases that will feel a bit out of place, but nothing terrible. Also, it becomes a bit too noticeable the "gay self-acceptance" stuff, particularly in the first half (I am not saying this as a bad thing, it just feels a bit repetitive).
Overall it was a nice reading experience, and I look forward for the development of your other work!