Hi. Just found your game and had a fun couple of hours playing it. Amazing work and very very fun. i love it alot. Here is my feedback and what i think may help for the future. But this is my opinion so do with it as you will.
1. Mousing over location will need to be brighter as it is slightly hard to see. While i understand that it is night and the tutorial does explain it (the tutorials are brilliant and well explained)
2..Talking with riya(flirting) the relationship bar on the side is a amazing design but the progress bar is hard to see especially when it has the rock behind it.
3.Also i think all the options to select like exit, help, esc option buttons at the corner need to be abit more visable as they are barely hard to see. I personally think it needs to be for all selectable buttons. (I do understand that it is to fit the theme of the game but most of the time i got confuse on where the buttons were at the beginning)
4.Personally for the dice game the options for selection (guessing the dice number, Dont believe and your win and lose ratio could be better positioned and more larger on the right side.
5. When Riya takes her top off when winning on the dice game. the item on the table looks odd and does not look like a top. (this is just me. I thought it was some black hole dildo or something)
6. Also when in the lucky kiss, what is the purpose of the feather pen on the top right? (i may be dumb on this one)
7. When in the mines for the first few mins i did not know i mine the rock with my weapon. I spend a hot minute going to town and wondering where is the pick axe. lol
8.Long range weapon feels unneeded or under powered. Through out the game i did not find any meaning use of it tbh.
9. For Lura, she does not have the option to put the clothes back on nor change the clothing as i saw she have other clothings options (This is my opinion, i just like girls in sexy clothings)
10. In the mines, i feel that the rotating with the directional function is slow. Me looking and my movement causes wierd rotation which makes it slow. (not sure how to explain this better tbh. Bujust feel abit janky to me)
There are more but i need to work in the morning so ill add on as i play more in the future. Also quick question. what happens if i take all the money in the bank? will anything happen? XD
Oh, I LOVE it when reviews are so detailed, and when people aren't shy about sharing every detail!! Thank you so much!!
Regarding the pen, it shows or hides quests. Just click on it, and active quests will appear if there are any.
You said the tutorials are good, but I'm still going to rework them. Both the interface and the mechanics themselves.
I'll be slightly modifying the interface interactions and will try to incorporate your suggestions!
I'll be completely reworking the scene with Lura, as well as Lura herself, and I'm working on it right now!
Regarding the character rotation in the dungeon scene, I intentionally made it smooth, but I'm thinking of revising it, maybe speeding it up a bit.
If you take all the money from Lura's bank, she'll have a "small special dialogue with a possible reward of your choice," hehe.
I'll be eagerly awaiting your additions, thanks again!
Hi, Glad to hear that you are doing the changes and improvement. I am looking forward to the next update and more. Im super excited. In the mean time i am here trying to empty Lura bank to get that dialogue but im loosing badly XD. but here are some of my additional inputs as mentioned.
11. When going through Lura game tutorial on what it is about, The lighting when shining at the sections of focus are super low and needs to be increased.
12. Lura explanation did not cover what step is. even now i do not know what step is. (i dont gamble irl so i am very blur on this). Ok while i was writing this and playing i suddenly figured it out.
13.Also able to have a windowless fullscreen. it is annoying when i am watching youtube on my other monitor it minimizes the game which is annoying. (This is my personal preference and not a urgent thing. its a pet peeve situation)
14.After emptying the bank from lura's game, i was hoping for a different and more secret reward but it was the same one i can get from improving my relation ship with lura. So i was slightly disappointed but i believe this can be easily changed as the game develops.
15. Going into the tunnel to mine, i notice the healthbar and mana bar (i believe its for magic in the future) is too dark and quite hard to see when in the dark dungeon. Need to be brighter and larger abit.
16.Going to the shop, items bought should no longer show up as i believe items dont stack.
17. I tried range weapons again and it just dont compete with the sword. (either needs to be faster reload, or wont trigger the rat gang pile when fired or the crossbow is fully loaded when entering the dungeon, or the arrow is pierce through multiple enemies.) Bow is even slower and not viable.
18. Also are any of the structures in the dungeon interactive? i do get some hints here and there but not sure if you can do anything to them.
19. Would be nice to collect bone of the fallen to help contribute to quest or help the town etc
General wishes from me.
-More characters (obviously XD. i can donate my OC if you need but i doubt it. like meeting them in town or interactive).
-More positions (i would like that wolfs rear soooo badly. She is a beauty)
-bigger dungeon (deeper you go the bigger the risk but higher the reward)
- More quest (feel free to make it more timed and more unique rewards if done well enough)
-I would like to meet the meet the owner of the bar for sure. (kinda curious who it is)
-More bar games (like blackjack or other simple games, plot twist as well where you can gamble your equipment which is a interesting twist)
- More enemies and location which i am looking forward to the forest.
- Maybe contribute to the lucky kiss by giving money to unluck or customize the shop which might help get more benefit)
-Switch between different species of your character
Just added some ideas here and there but feel free to ask me more if you need. i think i got around 12 hrs on the game alone on and off XD.
I would contribute to the game but money is tight for me but ill provide whatever feedback i can. I know you are just one pair of hands but you have my support for sure. Keep up the great work and looking forward to the next update
Hey, hey, I've been waiting!
Regarding all your comments about Lura's scenes, they're currently being completely reworked from scratch. Just like Lura herself. I'll try to make her scenes with a similar atmosphere, but more refined. Of course, I'll take your comments into account!
Regarding the interface issues, I've noted them down and will definitely fix them, thanks!
I'll also be making some minor tweaks to the weapons to improve their effectiveness where needed.
I'll need to get to the dungeon to improve it, but right now I'm focusing all my efforts on Lura's rebuild.
Of course, I hear all your suggestions regarding content diversity, and I'm happy to continue expanding it, improving its quality. Additional characters and locations are all planned!
And yes, you'll be able to meet the owner of Lucky Kiss, Lisa, relatively soon!
Ohhh... 12 hours... that's a LOT for such an early version!
But don't worry, you've really helped the development with your comments and suggestions, thank you very much!!
Glad to see your quick response. A pleasure to play your game. I look forward to the next update. Hopefully i can stack enough cash till the next update to make my time easier. If not ill just restart again hahahahha. but either way keep up the amazing work. ill eagerly await and patiently see your next work