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Has the potential to be one of the best AVNs in the genre.  Beautiful art, great music, UI is classic cRPG, actual combat that's more than just click here.  I genuinely said 'wow' a few times at how exceptional the mechanics are.

BUT the writing is a 3/10 from what I've seen thus far.  Not just the pacing, which is okay, but the quality and grammar.  Quality meaning specifically during 'romantic' scenes when you use the phrase 'your lenghts' 20 times in once scene, have the PC question things he was told directly 10 seconds ago (Asking Lady Wolf "what are you?!" after she literally just told him"), and the unsure tone that doesn't commit to any consistency. Also, not a stickler for grammar/spelling, but when I see 30-35 misspelled/incorrect terms (peak/peek, pluralizing singular words), it just feels like you cold have run it through spellcheck once and gotten rid of most of them.  

This isn't to be overly harsh, but because I really want to play a complete version, but I'm struggling to get through the fungus sewers and true form revelation bc the H-Scene writing is so 'not sexy'.