The dialogue was very jarring at times I'm sorry but it didn't stop me from enjoying the game itself. I always love sudden, stupid deaths like in Aria's Story or Ib, forces you to be careful. I think you also gave us too many indications as to what we should do (the "tutorial time" for example, we could have figured out easily that we'd have to push the statue to the left or the pauses during the chase to tell us where to go). Nonetheless this was pretty good for a first game, thank you for making it!