i liked it :] #mysickos
really great job capturing how gross and pathetic chasers can be, especially the online communities (reminded me of that one part of tell me i’m worthless) even so, i feel a weird sympathy for kate; she’s just a profoundly lonely and self-loathing person, as shitty as she is, and i see my worst traits reflected in her. you can really feel the awful gallstone of nausea coalescing over the course of the narrative until it all goes to shit and it comes flying back up in her face. chef’s kiss. the backgrounds had a nice surreal atmosphere that matched kate’s psyche well and the music was wonderful (of course)
my one big critique is that a few textboxes are pretty dense, narration/dialogue-wise, and splitting them up a bit would help with readability. the ui could also be a little better; it’s a little hard to read the character name without a background for the namebox
but overall awesome!! watching your career with great interest