Interesting game, not much of a fan of visual novels but the spanish version intrigued me since I am trying to learn it.
The art style and sound fit together very well. I only got to one ending witch I assume is "the ending"
My guess is that the idea behind the game is to have courage, tho I may be wrong since I haven't explore other endings.
My spanish is not great so I can't say that I understood everything I have read =).
The story is nice, it reminds me of a recent book I read and enjoyed.
I would mby skip some of the filler narration in some places as it doesn't really add any value to the story.
Overall is a great game that I enjoyed, good job and good luck!
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Glad you enjoyed the game. Yeah dude, play the other endings, they're quite different. I'll have to agree with the filler narration, it was kinda hard for me to know what to include or not, so I'll take note for next projects. And I tried to keep the writing on the simpler end cause I don't write much, so I'm glad you tried the spanish version, there's probably some grammatical errors I didn't catch in both languages tho.
Also, did you try the web version? I think in some operative systems it looks crisp and in others blurry, I still don't know how to solve that.