This was really good and I was enjoying it a lot until Hangman's Gambit. I tried a few times and gave up. Really promising, but please don't go with that as your final game mechanic. Also if you're looking for any help in writing, I've done writing for games before and I'm pretty good at characters, their dialogue and their development. What are you using to make this game? It runs really weird on my computer. I'm assuming it's just preliminary, so I'm not going to count that as a criticism. All in all, this game has a lot of promise and I enjoy where it's going, but again, please instill some kind of anti frustration features with Hangman's Gambit or something. Or at least a way to skip it if you don't want to change it.