SIMPLY AMAZING. This was definitely one of the few things that managed to keep me hooked on the story; normally I give up on stories in 2 chapters (or less). But this really grabbed me, congratulations!!!!!!
NOTE: I was curious about the option to go straight to chapter 6 and I saw that it has the option to choose our height (an option that isn't available if you play from the beginning). I don't know if it was intentional, but I wish that option was available at the start.