I like Chp 1. Good intro but—
WHY ARE WE RUNNING?!
It makes NO sense. I'm so stressed by that b. Like, girl they lit told you someone attacked you, you remember sht... and what? Instead of staying with the people that might give you an answer, you go "Let it go" and now your people are beat up because of your ZERO survival skills?
At this point I'll kill my own character. But, keep up the good work.