The dialogue is... sometimes straight up weird. One example (it happened before, but I decided to make a comment just now as I was playing and reached this scene):
MC: "When do I start?"
Carmen: "With a look like yours... pick out something to match the club's style."
Mc is asking about date or time to start working and Carmen answers with what he should wear, completely disregarding previous dialogue. It's not exactly unreadable, but I certainly feel like dialogue in this game needs some more love.
Apart from the dialogue (sometimes), I am really enjoying the game.