I love how you conveyed Lexona's betrayed feelings and the last "safe" place in her life being tainted, it was upsetting to read, but in a good way. Revo's POV at the end was interesting too. A lot and at the same time very little was left open ended. Revo is fatalistic about their future, and I can't blame her.
Also am very surprised to have learned from the other comments that you made this in only 6 days! Nice job.