Honestly, I had like 5 paragraphs ranting on the negatives of this game, but I went back and looked at some similar comments and notice that the creator is very much aware of that this game needs work so I'm not gonna bother being just another shitter.
What I will say is that the framework for this game is stellar. There's so much potential here if it gets the love and attention it deserves, even if it would mean rewrites and reorganization. I binged it all in one sitting and yes, I have strong opinions on it, but I still enjoyed playing through it and want to see the vision come to fruition.
I played Industry Baby first and frankly I see some of the DNA of this in that story as well in the early portion of the game that I originally wanted to call out, but after the first "week" that story gets significantly better and its clear the dev is definitely growing as a creator. I look forward to seeing how the experience with the other project helps with making this one better as well.
Keep it up man, I'm looking forward to your work!