I liked it! I do think the ‘twist’ (it’s not really a twist, since we all know how we got here, but) was revealed a little too early but he does say it’s because he couldn’t hold it in anymore, which is fair. Edit: Just realised the author is also the artist! I thought you did a really good job with the mmc. A lot of the visual novels on here and also a lot of manga/manhwa doesn’t do as good of a job showing the dead vs normal eyes, but you did a good job with the juxtaposition of the two. I really enjoyed seeing all the light diminish when he realises things aren’t going the way he wants, or when something he doesn’t care about is happening.
Spoilery comment below:
I’m kinda surprised about IN HINDSIGHT, if it’s a nightmare and not a real thing that’s happening, this is the first game I’ve played where the yandere has an ending where he just doesn’t yandere anymore.