A nice visual novel style game. The concept implementation is lovely. It really had me going like, "Why are all the choices wrong? Do I get no options to speak up?" And then the rewrite thing came in and it was so cool!
I've still got more games to go through, but if I were judging (I'm not unfortunately), this would be a winning contender.
If I am to nitpick nonetheless, I'll say when the aunty says to change clothes, and I select to "go in and put on a jacket", I was expecting to see the character with a jacket on top going forward.