Still going through this, but it looks great so far. The action blocks on pages 71-72 have some mistakes in the names
- Another racing game enthusiast working on a high-crunch racing ttrpg
Sure thing, as long as it's in good faith! For shorter form stuff, here works, but if it's a longer form of feedback you could either email me at adraco.testproductions@gmail.com or join my Discord. I will warn that the server is more focused on my fiction writing and streaming stuff, so there's a fair amount of saucy goblin nonsense, though the non-adult channels tend to be pretty chill and tame. That server can be found at https://discord.gg/6kHTdw4.