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This game is so freaking GOOOOOD! The variety and designs of the monster girls, their characterization, the quality of the writing, the world setting and background... It's kinda crazy how this game perfectly ticks so many boxes! I was also caught off guard by how descriptive and thorough the prose is in this game but i absolutely love it. One aspect i really enjoyed is the talking mannerisms that the girls have, such as Amanita almost always talking in "we" and using a lot of nature metaphors, much like Selunara and her moonlight metaphors. 

All that said, i do have a couple suggestions/concerns! Might as well put them here, since i'm already writing this wall of text: 

- so far you've done a great job at keeping things varied so i hope we keep visiting new places and locales, maybe even biomes? You certainly know how to paint a picture with your writing, and the actual renders make it even better.

- some of the characters' "voices" sound a bit...robotic, i guess? It's hard to put into words and i did get used to them after a while but maybe they could be a bit more human-like? Or even animal-like!

- speaking of voices, it would be sooooo nice if the sex scenes had some amount of voice work. I know it's really really hard to implement tho, i just figured i would mention it.

- i was hesitant to bring this up because the writing quality is generally great but i do think that sometimes the descriptions and similes go on a biiit too long. This happens very seldomly though!! 

All in all, i reeeeeeeally enjoyed my time with the game! My only regret is having found it so early in development and not being able to binge more of it lol. Looking forward to more content and good luck with development!

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Hey there! Thanks a ton, really happy you like the game! I really appreciate the comments about the writing. It's something I haven't been doing for that long, at least compared to the more visual parts of the game, so it's always especially nice to hear people appreciate the writing. Responding to a couple of your points:

More locations will naturally be shown as the story progresses, look forward to it!

Voices in sex scenes... Maybe some day.

Really appreciate you taking the time to write this! I can't do much about when you found the game, sadly, but keep following it and supporting it and I will keep working on it, and some day we'll be at the end!