i really liked the artstyle and animations, chill story on its own, for me the spicy scenes were spread well enough so that it made it even more easy to just zone out and simply read and enjoy. i hope more horse member content is planned tho since i kinda was expecting it given the title ^^' my probably biggest critic points would be that it doesnt really feel like you can ''resist or embrace the unusual magic'' yet or some minor typos every now and then but nothing major, to name the probably biggest one i saw: after the introduction of iris where it says ''before iris (i presume meant to be kaiah) could press for details, iris suddenly perks up'' or the sudden shift from 5 to 9 inches which could simply be just a growth tho... not that it matters. for such a young/fresh/new solo project you definitely have my respect regardless! stay safe and keep up the good work <3
(edit: this is for build 0.4.00 and everything mentioned might be patched already)