Fan over here! I like the game, the art was nice, cutscenes were great and like the soundtrack too. But I only have two complaints tho😓 one is was how the story was written, not the plot itself just how it was written down/narrated. Some parts felt a little empty and lack flavor or maybe it's just because I'm a writer😅 and my other complain was the dialogues, some felt unnatural and had wrong grammar. But I understand since your first language isn't English and that your team is small, I just hope that in the future that it'll improve and that you'll make the game even better. ❤️❤️❤️ Srry if it's long lol
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Thank you so much for telling me this! Since the scripts were created by my manager (whom I respect for her writing) before one of my team members joined and helped me a little bit. I'd planned to have episode 1 rewritten to improve the storyline along with the other episodes. After all, this is a demo version so it's not fully official! We'll try our best to make it meaningful ^^
Thanks for your honest and respectful feedback!
Regarding your complaints, I'm sorry if the storytelling and some dialogues don't fit your taste. I understand, but I hope you also understand that the game is currently on demo.
However, we will make sure to note your words as we promise that once the game is completed, the storytelling and dialogues will be improved in the near future!