Hey! Just gave it a try.
I think the premise is great, running from time. I love that you use the car alarm extended reprise as the intro song. It gave the start a profound sort of feeling.
The symbolism is interesting and thought provoking.
I suppose my critique would be, I didn't find the monster that scary. To reference another from this jam, the flower from Flowers Don't Die scared the absolute hell out of me. I just didn't feel the same way running from time.
Overall, I had fun and I think it's an interesting game.